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Fragile and hopeless
As a beautiful lily
You claim yourself to be
Hopeless romantics we indeed are
We long for the best
Pray for no mess
The years to share with our
Beloved future spouses
From what I've observed
You look at the actions of love
I cannot see where your eyes
on what side of your face
I, however, can sense
Your deep longing for being
Able to provide protection for
The one whom you could share your passion
And dreams with
You long for a Juliet
I thirst for a kind Romeo
The Shakespearean characters
Who felt such a deep longing
For each others' souls
Your prose is nothing short of phenomenal
The poetry of an inspired artist
Who is inspired by others
Most importantly inspired by God
And all He provides for us
Even when we don't deserve it
So Gracious is He
What luck do I have
That I meet a beautiful fellow
One as kind as yourself
Your tender heart shows
With every reply to our comments
Surely it must be made from gold
Melded into the most rarest
And greatest of all jewelry
How can anyone not long for you
As much as you long the same?
What makes you more and more
Handsome is your love for God
That, indeed, is the most handsome quality
A man should have above all
This is what I want
Hang steady for the love
That which will pierce through
Not Cupid's Arrow, but from God
Your heart remain true and caring
Please stay hopeful
My Hopeless Romantic friend of mine
Hopeless Romantics til the end...~~~
As a beautiful lily
You claim yourself to be
Hopeless romantics we indeed are
We long for the best
Pray for no mess
The years to share with our
Beloved future spouses
From what I've observed
You look at the actions of love
I cannot see where your eyes
on what side of your face
I, however, can sense
Your deep longing for being
Able to provide protection for
The one whom you could share your passion
And dreams with
You long for a Juliet
I thirst for a kind Romeo
The Shakespearean characters
Who felt such a deep longing
For each others' souls
Your prose is nothing short of phenomenal
The poetry of an inspired artist
Who is inspired by others
Most importantly inspired by God
And all He provides for us
Even when we don't deserve it
So Gracious is He
What luck do I have
That I meet a beautiful fellow
One as kind as yourself
Your tender heart shows
With every reply to our comments
Surely it must be made from gold
Melded into the most rarest
And greatest of all jewelry
How can anyone not long for you
As much as you long the same?
What makes you more and more
Handsome is your love for God
That, indeed, is the most handsome quality
A man should have above all
This is what I want
Hang steady for the love
That which will pierce through
Not Cupid's Arrow, but from God
Your heart remain true and caring
Please stay hopeful
My Hopeless Romantic friend of mine
Hopeless Romantics til the end...~~~
For a great friend of mine who is a great poet, has such a kind heart, and truly deserves the best in life 
Dude, you have a heart that is truly in the right place and certainly have a heart for God 
Any woman would be a fool to not see the precious devotion you bring within yourself, waiting to be poured out onto the surface like an overflowing waterfall. Your heart is indeed so beautiful and I pray that God will show you the special woman He longs for you to hold and cherish for the rest of your days on this planet 
2013 (c) ChiharusMoon
Dude, you have a heart that is truly in the right place and certainly have a heart for God Any woman would be a fool to not see the precious devotion you bring within yourself, waiting to be poured out onto the surface like an overflowing waterfall. Your heart is indeed so beautiful and I pray that God will show you the special woman He longs for you to hold and cherish for the rest of your days on this planet 2013 (c) ChiharusMoon
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Absolutely amazing, and that is an understatement! I must say you put a lot more thought into your poems, compared to mine, that much is obvious, it is probably one of the most sweetest things I've ever read, probably because it was actually intended for me 
I don't think we need to be Hopeless until the end, I would like to become Hopeful! Wildfires always go out, so they say, but this Wildfire is not going to worry about that, instead he is on a quest to pursue and find his Redemption I really do love my name, and I thank you for this wonderful poem, and must say it strikes true for both sides Glad I can call you my friend! You're just too awesome opossum 
I don't think we need to be Hopeless until the end, I would like to become Hopeful! Wildfires always go out, so they say, but this Wildfire is not going to worry about that, instead he is on a quest to pursue and find his Redemption I really do love my name, and I thank you for this wonderful poem, and must say it strikes true for both sides Glad I can call you my friend! You're just too awesome opossum